Before

The beautiful art that these two have given, brought great pride to the towns. These towns that were once “known for problems like crime, poverty, and violent drug war” (TED)

After

The beautiful art that these two have given, brought great pride to the towns. According to Haas, these towns that were once “known for problems like crime, poverty, and violent drug war”(00:43), are now beautiful places that people enjoy going to visit and see the great art work.

Before

Southan expands on the EA’s beliefs and he goes on to thinking about, is money more helpful or is giving you time more helpful for the less fortunate? At points he says “I think the work would be unlivable without art”.

After

Shouthan explains how he creates dark comedies and how he feels that his art touches people and brings them joy. Southan says. “I think the world would be unlivable without art” (p.435), and this shows how much he believes art and its beauty changes people.

A quote I added:

These workers were giving back to their own community and it brought them a feeling of pride. Hahn explained how “The city of Philadelphia thanked every single one of them and gave them a merit for their accomplishment”(6:40).