The purple highlighted words are all of the transition words that I used throughout my paper. I feel that I have an okay amount, but I would still like to add more. What I really noticed was that I used the same transition words a lot, so I want to go back through my paper and change some of the wording. The word “but” came up a lot and I could use the words, although, despite, however, instead so that its not to repetitive.

The words that are highlighted in my pointing words. By using these words it kept the point of the paper relevant and made it stronger. These words also help refer back to previous sentences that I was talking about. I notice that I really said art and science a lot but I feel that I didn’t over do it.

The blue highlighted areas are where I feel that I repeated my opinion. I noticed that a lot of times I talked about how art should be added into science.  I also just repeated the whole idea of adding art into science. I noticed that I talked about adding art into education a lot.