First I’d like to start out by say I LOVED having to do this activity. Having to write down a introduction almost forced me to do in a way. In the past my introduction was always the last thing for me to write. But now having a rough draft of my intro paragraph I feel like will help me with my whole paper so much. Also then going back and reading others work, opens new doors and connects for me and it gives me more ideas for my own writing. I think this process is super helpful because you get other students opinions on your work, and from there on your work can only get better as you write. What I plan on doing when its time, is to write my first draft, then go back through these comments and see if it sparks anymore ideas that I could add into my writing to make it stronger. This was a great activity and I’d love to do it again!

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